Hey guys! I've recently been posting the final draft of my novel online. Specifically the first few chapters. I'm looking for an outside opinion. Here's one of the links to it, if you'd like to drop by and share your thoughts:
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/208939?started_reading=true
Thanks!
Oh, and if there's any help you guys need, too, feel free to post about it :D
Awesome book! You've chosen an intriguing plot which is admirable, the key is being consistent. You're an amazing writer! keep writing and I'm sure one day you'd be a well-renowned author! Good luck on your journey!
P.S. I'm a teen writer too :D